Way­far­ing through Poem-Draw­ing in Spa­tial Design

Correspondence as Self-Altering Along Place-Making

Tadeja Zupančič, Viktorija Bogdanova, Igor Toš

Wayfaring as the Softball’ Metaphor

A per­son can move on foot from one place to anoth­er in three ways: 1. by gaz­ing at (dis­solv­ing with­in) the sur­round­ing as isolated—separated—from the self; 2. by walk­ing with eyes wide closed, con­cealed in one’s own inner thoughts; 3. by estab­lish­ing a dia­logue with the sur­round­ing through sen­so­r­i­al lis­ten­ing and reflec­tive respon­sive­ness. Only the third way can be said to con­sti­tute a real jour­ney, since the mode of dis­place­ment is trans­for­ma­tive for both inter­locu­tors: the trav­el­er and the sur­round­ings. This anal­o­gy can also be per­ceived as a metaphor for the research jour­ney, in which human beings gen­er­ate and inte­grate explic­it and tac­it knowl­edge. The anthro­pol­o­gist Tim Ingold names this jour­ney way­far­ing”: com­bin­ing move­ment and atten­tion” in the process of dis­cern­ing the out­side world through inner means of per­cep­tion and eval­u­a­tion (2016|2007, 16).

In a lec­ture titled The Art of Pay­ing Atten­tion” (2017), Ingold illus­trates the dif­fer­ence between sci­en­tif­ic and artis­tic approach­es. The first approach is com­pared to the hard-ball-metaphor: a hard ball hits a glass sur­face until it breaks to pieces. Then, sci­en­tists call this a break­through”; they treat real­i­ty as a series of resis­tant sur­faces” which should be tor­tured to reveal secrets (Ingold 2017). On the con­trary, the soft ball takes the prop­er­ties of the sur­face” while the sur­face deforms accord­ing to the inten­si­ty of the touch: a kind of mutu­al respon­sive­ness and cor­re­spon­dence” occurs (Ingold 2017). The hard-ball iso­lates the object of research from real­i­ty by vio­lat­ing and deval­u­at­ing its nature, while remain­ing rigid­ly unchanged itself; the soft-ball devel­ops a dia­logue with the wider con­text of the sur­face, while allow­ing itself to be mod­i­fied by the touch. The soft­ball metaphor exhibits artis­tic prac­tices, but also the way­far­er” mode of being and research.

Why is the soft­ball metaphor impor­tant for the artis­tic dimen­sion in archi­tec­ture? The soft­ball approach can be named a way­far­ing through the design process. It is both sen­si­tive discernment—the under­stand­ing of spa­tial qual­i­ties (through experience)—and a poet­ic reviv­ing of their rel­e­vance in a present con­text (through imag­i­na­tion). Poem-draw­ing is a syn­ton­ic mode of artis­tic think­ing-through-doing in spa­tial design. It works as a soft­ball, a trans­for­ma­tive tool that inter­weaves the paths of the way­far­er and the place of research. It cul­ti­vates a will to under­stand a spa­tial sit­u­a­tion in depth and to care­ful­ly trans­late spa­tial val­ues into guide­lines for fur­ther design devel­op­ment. In research-through-design, it works as a trans­duc­er”: a trans­la­tor and gen­er­a­tor of move­ments that come togeth­er as a bundling of affects” named enchant­ment” (Ingold, 2016). Thus, a spa­tial enchant­ment would mean grab­bing” the atten­tion and offer­ing a path” of that atten­tion that one can fol­low, in one’s own way, in an affec­tive cor­re­spon­dence of move­ments” (Ingold, 2016). It demands wayfarer’s aware­ness in rec­og­niz­ing an exist­ing chant in the world, which is lat­er trans­lat­ed into an imag­ined place, preg­nant with new enchantment-possibilities. 

Poem-draw­ings are knots on the way towards such enchant­ment, although as proces­su­al modes they are works influ­enced by and/or evok­ing enchant­ment in them­selves. The aim of this essay is to empha­size how their epis­te­mo­log­i­cal soft­ness encour­ages: 1. a seri­ous immer­sion into wayfarer’s embodied/tacit knowl­edge (not only explic­it knowl­edge) as core fac­tor in design; 2. an inte­gra­tion of what is sensed, felt, known, desired and cre­at­ed through the self, in an authen­tic way­far­ing with curios­i­ty and care for the per­son-world”1 inter­weav­ing (Sea­mon, 2000, 5). For that pur­pose, it is impor­tant to stress from the very begin­ning that we refer to embod­ied knowl­edge” not as the low­er part of Polanyi’s pyra­mid2, but as cur­rents of water flow­ing around” an arch­i­pel­ago of islands” – the accu­mu­lat­ed data that form a net­work of sta­t­ic judge­ments and opin­ions (Ingold 2016). Hence, embod­ied knowl­edge is a field of action where poem-draw­ing allows a ver­tig­i­nous­ly tur­bu­lent review of what is con­sid­ered known” and famil­iar”. They work like a dis­turb­ing eddy”, or vor­tex” (Ingold, 2016) that makes one look at the spa­tial con­text of the design task as seen for the first time.

Knowledge that Grows from the Inside: Ingold’s Anthropology Against Objectivity

To under­stand the rel­e­vance of poem-draw­ing as a way­far­ing tool in spa­tial obser­va­tion and re-cre­ation, it is nec­es­sary to intro­duce the main con­cep­tu­al guide­lines in Ingold’s per­spec­tive of what think­ing-through-mak­ing or research-through-design should con­tain as modes of under­stand­ing the world and the self as an inher­ent part of that world. Let us elab­o­rate a few of them by con­tex­tu­al­iz­ing their rel­e­vance to the poem-draw­ing wayfaring.

Truth Against Objectivity

The core val­ue of any research should be the appeal for truth”, not use­ful­ness or prag­mat­ic applic­a­bil­i­ty (Ingold 2017). This con­cept of truth expands beyond the rigid obses­sion with accu­mu­lat­ed data, iso­lat­ed from the expe­ri­en­tial and social con­text. In a sim­i­lar man­ner, Alber­to Pérez-Gómez intro­duced the term poiesis” to explain the way in which human beings (unlike ani­mals) adapt to the envi­ron­ment; but this adap­ta­tion is always aimed at more than pre­serv­ing life” (2006, 6). 

In research envi­ron­ments that are sen­si­tive to poiesis”3 and arts in spa­tial design, one’s search for truth and one’s tying to the world, should devel­op as an antithe­sis of prag­ma­tism” (Tarkovsky 1989, 40). Thus, the means for find­ing a per­son­al­ized way in the cre­ative process con­sti­tutes a meta-lan­guage” that helps peo­ple impart infor­ma­tion about them­selves and assim­i­late the expe­ri­ence of oth­ers” through spir­i­tu­al bond­ing far beyond the lev­el of phys­i­cal criss­cross­ing (40).

But what is the con­cept of truth in such a poet­i­cal approach to the built real­i­ty? Accord­ing to Ingold, truth is a uni­son of imag­i­na­tion and expe­ri­ence” in a world in which we are alive and the world is alive to us” (2017). As such, truth depends large­ly on our full par­tic­i­pa­tion” in the world: in order to be truth­ful, all human knowl­edge must grow from the inside” with our par­tic­i­pa­to­ry and obser­va­tion­al involve­ment” in the places we are mov­ing through (Ingold, 2018). While objec­tiv­i­ty out­side the self is core val­ue in sci­en­tif­ic exper­i­ment (aim­ing to test” and trick” the world), re-cre­ation of truth through the self is the core val­ue of the artis­tic exper­i­ment (“an expe­ri­ence enact­ed”) (Ingold, 2018). This state­ment echoes Tarkovsky’s rebel­lion against the abstract notion of order: his poet­ics of mem­o­ry and log­ic of dreams call for asso­cia­tive link­ing’ and both affec­tive and ratio­nal appraisal” by the spec­ta­tor, mak­ing him a par­tic­i­pant in the process of dis­cov­er­ing the life” hap­pen­ing in the art­work (1989, 20). Anoth­er anthro­pol­o­gist stress­ing this dif­fer­ence in a sim­i­lar way, is Ernest Cas­sir­er: in his view, while artis­tic approach­es offer an inten­si­fi­ca­tion” of real­i­ty, sci­en­tif­ic views appear as abbre­vi­a­tions” of real­i­ty (1994|1944, 184).

Poem-draw­ing allows the dia­logue between author’s expe­ri­ence and imag­i­na­tion to become core ingre­di­ent in dis­cov­er­ing the true” way in design. It dis­turbs and re-cre­ates both explic­it and tac­it expe­ri­ence, the mem­o­ry of emo­tion­al expe­ri­ence and cre­ativ­i­ty in cycles of two (non-lin­ear) phas­es: moments of enlight­en­ment (duende/epiphany, a height­ened state of emo­tion, expres­sion and authen­tic­i­ty) and peri­ods of elab­o­ra­tion” of that enlight­en­ment (Carafoli, 2016, 412). What makes poem-draw­ing an impor­tant alter­na­tive mode in the search for truth through the self, becomes clear only when it is observed in rela­tion to the objec­tive (con­ven­tion­al) tools of research and design: a knot along the way, where dif­fer­ent modes of knowl­edge are inte­grat­ed, it offers a reflec­tive view on the jour­ney in a cer­tain site-spe­cif­ic and time-spe­cif­ic moment. Poem-draw­ing grasps a rel­e­vant emo­tion­al con­di­tion, but its con­tex­tu­al­iza­tion and inte­gra­tion in the design process occurs as a con­struc­tive dia­logue between the sub­jec­tive and objec­tive dimen­sion in archi­tec­ture. Poem-draw­ings help the archi­tect to observe the design task not as a thing sep­a­rat­ed from himself/herself, but as co-cre­ative field of trans­for­ma­tive forces mov­ing through him/her, mold­ing the path in each moment of the process. 

Wayfaring as Attentionality Against Interaction as Intentionality

In a lec­ture in 2016, titled Train­ing the Sens­es”, Ingold tries to empha­size the impor­tance of response-abil­i­ty as a core skill in way­far­ing: a capac­i­ty to go along with what­ev­er is occu­py­ing your atten­tion” (2016). Two pre­con­di­tions for way­far­ing are need­ed: 1. sen­si­tiv­i­ty in con­cen­trat­ing your atten­tion in deep­er lev­els of read­ing and inter­pret­ing the qual­i­ties of the place (an eddy, a knot); 2. going along through time, instead of leap­ing across points (closed cir­cles) with blind­ed sens­es. The oppo­site of way­far­ing is inter­ac­tion: back and forth” move­ment between inten­tion­al beings” that share ener­gies out­side them­selves, using the hard­ball metaphor (2016). Way­far­ing, on the oth­er hand, cul­ti­vates a kind of cor­re­spon­dence: two beings going along togeth­er and attend­ing to one anoth­er” (2016). While inten­tion­al­i­ty stems from the rep­re­sen­ta­tion of things, atten­tion­al­li­ty moves through things: it flows through and around them, per­vad­ing them with observer’s atten­tion and pres­ence. Hence: a self-alter­ing dia­logue is being estab­lished. It is not only about cor­re­spond­ing” between the parts includ­ed in this dia­logue, it is also about dif­fer­en­ti­at­ing them­selves from the oth­er. This process of dif­fer­en­ti­a­tion resem­bles Simondon’s or Jung’s indi­vid­u­a­tion process: nev­er com­plete, always on-going, a life-long trans­for­ma­tive process of self-dis­cov­ery and self-altering.

Addi­tion­al­ly, there is a dif­fer­ence between the anatom­i­cal human body and the body of atten­tion. An illus­tra­tive exam­ple of the sec­ond con­cept is the process of hear­ing: the body is stretch­ing towards” the sounds com­ing from the out­side, so it becomes a bun­dle of sen­sa­tions” that spread in dif­fer­ent direc­tion, inter­twin­ing inside the lis­ten­ing sub­ject (Ingold 2017). This is a much dif­fer­ent approach than explain­ing: in order to per­ceive work as art, you have to let it be in you in its pres­ence”, while you, on the oth­er hand, are attend­ing it from the inside by pay­ing atten­tion to that pres­ence (2017).

A proces­su­al design tool, poem-draw­ing can cul­ti­vate an acute atten­tion and dia­logue. It is mod­i­fi­able accord­ing to the inner­ness of the archi­tect, and the time-spa­tial con­text of the design task. It meets the core require­ment of phe­nom­e­no­log­i­cal research: the researcher must adapt his instru­ments accord­ing to his or her own truth and the nature and cir­cum­stances of the phe­nom­e­non” (Sea­mon 2000, 11). A poem-draw­ing helps one pre­pare his or her being for lis­ten­ing to the cur­rent whis­per of a spe­cif­ic place on dif­fer­ent lev­els. The design­er cor­re­sponds with a place of inter­ven­tion not only by sens­ing and con­tem­plat­ing with its appear­ance from the inside, but also re-imag­in­ing this whis­per in an appro­pri­ate future sce­nario. He is attend­ing the whis­per by inhab­it­ing its pres­ence in dif­fer­ent time-frames.

Method Against Methodology: Integration Against Accumulation of Knowledge

Ingold uses the word method’ not in Feyerabend’s con­no­ta­tion — a reduc­tor of the rich­ness of being” (Fey­er­abend, 1999). On the con­trary, he refers to method” as a trans­for­ma­tive tool that allows going along with things, tak­ing its shape accord­ing to the way the things unfold in the moment of atten­tion. Unlike method, method­ol­o­gy is an ene­my of cor­re­spon­dence”: it works by keep­ing dis­tance from things” for the sake of pure objec­tiv­i­ty” (2017). Method­ol­o­gy immu­nizes the object of atten­tion against (out of) its pres­ence, decon­tex­tu­al­iz­ing its ongo­ing life: the extrac­tion occurs in an insen­si­tive way that leads to an obses­sive super­sti­tious over­es­ti­mat­ing of naked facts” iso­lat­ed from their rel­e­vance in the real world (Jung 1963, 361). Method­ol­o­gy does not offer any inte­gra­tion of naked facts”; it accu­mu­lates them in an end­less assem­blage of out­ward­ly artic­u­lat­ed conjunctions.

Ingold’s dis­tinc­tion between method and method­ol­o­gy leads to anal­o­gous dis­tinc­tion between qual­i­ty and datum. Qual­i­ty is the way a thing reveals itself to you, becom­ing a part of your per­cep­tion”, where­as datum4 is the moment when you trans­form that qual­i­ty into an abstrac­tion by divid­ing a world of process, of flow” (2017). In trac­ing spa­tial val­ues, how is it pos­si­ble to reduce such vio­la­tion of the life process of the observed phe­nom­e­non to a min­i­mum? How to inter­pret a spa­tial qual­i­ty through intu­itive way­far­ing, avoid­ing dead ends of abstract notions of order? Pure objec­tiv­i­ty is as illu­so­ry as pure trans­port … This illu­sion can be sus­tained by sup­press­ing the embod­ied expe­ri­ence of place-to-place move­ment that is intrin­sic to life, growth and knowl­edge” (Ingold 2016|2007, 105). The hard­ball approach gen­er­ates this sup­pres­sion, trans­form­ing the erot­ic space between the known and the unknown” into a dry assem­blage of con­junc­tions (Perez-Gomez 2006, 69).

While observ­ing the poem-draw­ings of renowned archi­tects, we can under­stand their design deci­sions and spa­tial philoso­phies in a depth that goes beyond any method­ol­o­gy or prin­ci­ple (Kulper, Hej­duk, Le Cor­busier, Van Den Berghe, Holl). They exhib­it the architect’s dis­ci­pline of every­day spir­i­tu­al growth, life and knowl­edge cre­ation; they trace the cre­ative process by exhibit­ing moments of pro­gres­sion­al order­ing of real­i­ty” (Jarvis 1997, 69 qtd. in Ingold 2016|2007, 91) or as inte­gra­tion of knowl­edge along a path or trav­el” (Ingold 2016|2007, 91).

Varieties of Spatial Wayfaring Through Poem-Drawing

Poem-draw­ing can be con­sid­ered to open inti­mate win­dows between the self and the observed phe­nom­e­non (archi­tec­tur­al or urban set­ting) because it is, in itself, a soft­ball” tool which tries to trace life itself, as felt by a way­far­er. Trans­lat­ing the move­ments of life, which nev­er have a clear final mean­ing, it aims to clar­i­fy” an expe­ri­ence (felt, desired, designed) by grasp­ing its flow in a cre­ative knot in the design process: the threads from which it is traced are lines of way­far­ing” (Ingold 2016|2007, 104). Depend­ing on the time peri­od in which the poem-draw­ing appears, it frames the inter­weav­ing of dif­fer­ent threads of knowl­edge: the inter­weav­ing vari­eties define influ­en­tial reflec­tions with­in the design process.

Gen­er­al­ly, we can dis­tin­guish three types of influ­ence: 1. emo­tive (instead of descrip­tive) re-read­ing of the place (cul­ti­vat­ing per­cep­tion through the self); 2. poet­ic gen­er­a­tion of spa­tial ideas, free from an overt­ly pre­cise lin­guis­tic and visu­al archi­tec­tur­al lan­guage; 3. reflec­tive defa­mil­iar­iza­tion from rou­tine per­cep­tion – artis­tic pro­ce­dure of cre­at­ing a res­o­nance between oth­er­wise dis­parate images, enhanc­ing of the per­cep­tion of the famil­iar through cycles of dis­tanc­ing from and immers­ing in the design-relat­ed prob­lema­tique. But these types” – they nev­er occur lin­ear­ly; more often, we use com­bi­na­tion of two or three of them, accord­ing to the com­plex­i­ty of the spe­cif­ic Path-find­ing. Anal­o­gous­ly, we exhib­it three types of way­far­ing through poem-draw­ing: the design exam­ples via case stud­ies, and the author’s per­son­al works.

Re-Reading Places Through the Present Self: Wayfaring as Concretization / Topo-Empathy

We use the word re-read­ing” to stress the impor­tance of vig­i­lant obser­va­tion of the place of inter­ven­tion. It means re-estab­lish­ment of the tie one has with a place by mov­ing fur­ther and clos­er to it, inhab­it­ing with fresh sens­es, ful­ly aware of inner and out­er change. Here, poem-draw­ings work as instants of grasp­ing such inhab­i­ta­tion, trans­for­ma­tive par­tic­i­pa­tion and aware­ness. They enhance, trace and devel­op two states: being-in-love con­di­tion (pas­sion­ate com­mit­ment) and cre­ative-process-con­di­tion (inter­pret­ing mean­ings through cre­at­ing). Both reflect an inten­si­fied capac­i­ty in the archi­tect to dis­cern and re-cre­ate ties, metaphors, analo­gies between seem­ing­ly non-con­nect­ed qual­i­ties.

Re-read­ing places is most inten­sive at the begin­ning of the design process: col­lect­ing pho­tographs, sto­ries, maps, tech­ni­cal draw­ings, inter­views – the entire body of extract­ed infor­ma­tion that should be fil­tered through a per­son­al mesh­work of under­stand­ing. The moment when rough data trans­forms into rel­e­vant knowl­edge, is when we include empa­thy as a mode of under­stand­ing: see­ing through the skin of the users, per­ceiv­ing spa­tial enti­ties as human beings (liv­ing Oth­er­ness), devel­op­ing a will to under­stand a spa­tial prob­lem from dif­fer­ent view­points. And, it is not always con­cern­ing a spa­tial design prob­lem: often, archi­tects find jour­neys, artis­tic and cul­tur­al expe­ri­ences, books and non-archi­tec­tur­al ref­er­ences a source of inspi­ra­tion that makes them dis­place their view­point and to see the world in the light of the new design task. In all cas­es, the architect’s inner self is the fil­ter through which the threads of influ­ence inter­weave and gen­er­ate mean­ings that cre­ate an order out of what is per­ceived as a myr­i­ad of impressions.

Page cover of Journey to the East by Le Corbusier, translated by Ivan Žaknić, reproduced courtesy of The MIT Press
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Page cover of Journey to the East by Le Corbusier, translated by Ivan Žaknić, reproduced courtesy of The MIT Press

For exam­ple, Le Corbusier’s Jour­ney to the East” (2007|1911), [ 1 ] is a trav­el­ogue of the young archi­tect, a tes­ti­mo­ny of way­far­ing – with­out inten­tion (not design-cre­at­ed obser­va­tion) but with full atten­tion towards read­ing the dif­fer­ent lay­ers of the envi­ron­ment he moved through. Only lat­er did these notes of inter­weaved vers­es and draw­ings become core guide­lines of his vision of the new archi­tec­ture. These ear­ly poem-draw­ings” can be con­sid­ered tac­it knowl­edge; their impor­tance became vis­i­ble when the author trans­lat­ed their spa­tial qual­i­ties in his design solu­tion for the con­tem­po­rary world. Le Cor­busier him­self wrote “…to draw… to trace the lines… han­dle the vol­ume, orga­nize the sur­face… means first to look… to observe… to dis­cov­er” (cit­ed in Bolles+Wilson 2011, 20). The lessons in observ­ing archi­tec­ture are lat­er applied in his holis­tic notion of place-mak­ing.

Van Den Berghe, drawings excavating the memory of the old home. Screenshots from a lecture at KU Leuven, 05.02.2016
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Van Den Berghe, drawings excavating the memory of the old home. Screenshots from a lecture at KU Leuven, 05.02.2016

Anoth­er exam­ple of re-read­ing a place is revis­it­ing the mem­o­ry of emo­tion­al expe­ri­ences relat­ed to their past appear­ance [ 2 ]. Jo Van Den Berghe opens a lec­ture at KU Leu­ven (2015) by read­ing a poem ded­i­cat­ed to his grand­moth­er. Then, he exhibits a body of research con­cern­ing the house in which he grew up with her; since the house does not exist any­more, way­far­ing is done through his embod­ied knowl­edge, lack­ing any dia­logue with the oth­er users” of the house. By obses­sive writ­ing, re-draw­ing and recre­ations using work­ing mod­els, he suc­ceeds to rec­og­nize spa­tial frag­ments that are embed­ded in his inner self as uncon­scious pat­terns that influ­ence each of his designs. Sim­i­lar research has been made by the author in 2018: inspired by Tarkovsky’s Mir­ror (1975) (the inter­weav­ing of Andrey’s cin­e­mat­ic image and Arseny’s poems), an attempt to inves­ti­gate the embod­ied mem­o­ry of the grand-mater­nal home was done through poem-draw­ing (Bog­dano­va & Zupan­cic, 2018, 222–234).

The re-read­ing of places can revive his­tor­i­cal spa­tial val­ues through their con­tex­tu­al­iza­tion in ques­tions of the present. This is impor­tant because one can­not trace the val­ues of a place with­out tak­ing into con­sid­er­a­tion the sto­ries of the peo­ple who were inter­wo­ven with­in that knot at dif­fer­ent time peri­ods. Here, we are not inter­est­ed in his­tor­i­cal facts or accu­mu­lat­ed chrono­log­i­cal data; on the con­trary, we are inter­est­ed in trans­lat­ing blind sen­sa­tions and infor­ma­tion into a liv­ing rel­e­vant ingre­di­ent of the present. To cre­ate this healthy degree of abstrac­tion5, empa­thy and imag­i­na­tion are need­ed. As Alber­to Perez Gomez has stat­ed, Where­as his­to­ry recounts real facts from the past, poet­ry (fic­tion or dra­ma) opens up the future by tran­scend­ing the first order of ref­er­ence to real­i­ty. In oth­er words, fic­tion reveals what is essen­tial for humans in recog­ni­tion of our mor­tal­i­ty and tran­scen­dence, and thus opens up poten­tial real­i­ties for cul­ture” (2006, 152). We need to bring mere data into pres­ence by liv­ing through the skin of anoth­er human, plant, ani­mal, from anoth­er time-space. We can have a vision­ary and hermeneu­tic approach towards the spa­tial val­ues that sur­round us, only if we are able to inte­grate our own expe­ri­ences (and dreams), our com­pas­sion with oth­ers’ expe­ri­ences (and dreams) and the less-human fea­tures in our sur­round­ing into a sto­ry which is mean­ing­ful and under­stand­able as expe­ri­en­tial truth.

A poem-drawing in the first cycle of the trialogues in the research “Tracing Spatial Values Through Poem-Drawing” (Bogdanova, Spasevska and Nikova 2018, 129-143)
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A poem-drawing in the first cycle of the trialogues in the research “Tracing Spatial Values Through Poem-Drawing” (Bogdanova, Spasevska and Nikova 2018, 129-143)

Fig­ure [ 3 ] is an exam­ple where per­son­al and bor­rowed mem­o­ries are inte­grat­ed with a poet­ic inter­pre­ta­tion of facts in a spa­tial nar­ra­tive. This is done through the skin of an imag­i­nary char­ac­ter: a young preg­nant woman from 1944. The aim is to dis­cern how (and if) spa­tial val­ues could vary through time in the cul­tur­al­ly com­plex place of research: Ohrid city. Simul­ta­ne­ous­ly, poem-draw­ings were gen­er­at­ed from two oth­er co-researchers who devel­oped sto­ries through two oth­er imag­i­nary char­ac­ters: an old lady in 2084 (dystopi­an sce­nario) and a 7‑year old girl in 2018. By com­par­ing poem-draw­ings from three time peri­ods, we aimed to ques­tion whether it is pos­si­ble to reveal which spa­tial qual­i­ties remain absolute, time­less, and derived from the speci­fici­ty of a par­tic­u­lar site. Fig­ure [ 3 ] belongs to the first phase of the tri­a­logues: re-read­ing the places by way­far­ing through the mem­o­ry of (lived and imag­i­nary) emo­tion­al experience.


Scenery so modest
as so hardly constitute
architecture.
The idea is to create
within everyday life
this kind of
personal-scale openness,
a product of
individual experience:
an accumulation
of such mini-landscapes
in different places.

Ishigami 2018, 21.


Landscapes that were originally here,
but never met,
mix and mingle with each other.
Making a new natural environment,
that was not in the original
natural environment,
without using anything new,
and without discarding anything
that was here.

Ishigami 2018, 45.


Translating Place Through the Present Self: Wayfaring as Abstraction / Heuristic Observation

By trans­la­tion of places we mean a meta­mor­pho­sis from an exist­ing con­di­tion to an appro­pri­ate design pro­pos­al. Way­far­ing here occurs as a design-ori­ent­ed read­ing of place and aims to con­clude with a new­ly com­posed spa­tial solu­tion. To do this, a degree of abstrac­tion of the spa­tial qual­i­ty out of con­text is nec­es­sary: the defa­mil­iar­iza­tion phase pre­vents the observ­ing sub­ject from pas­sive­ly re-think­ing the envi­ron­men­tal set­ting. This kind of learn­ing through doing requires an inten­si­fi­ca­tion of all our ener­gies” and our fullest con­cen­tra­tion” in inter­pret­ing the per­ceived qual­i­ties into rel­e­vant ingre­di­ents of the process in archi­tec­ture (Cas­sir­er 1994|1944, 210). As soon as we fail to con­cen­trate, and we give way to a mere play of plea­sur­able feel­ings and asso­ci­a­tions, we have lost sight” of the design process as liv­ing art­work in itself (210).

Villas in Dali (author’s photograph of the model)
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Villas in Dali (author’s photograph of the model)

Where­as in re-read­ing places a sen­si­tiv­i­ty towards lis­ten­ing was need­ed, here the require­ments are more com­pli­cat­ed – a sen­si­tiv­i­ty in cre­ation­al respond­ing is a pre-con­di­tion for suc­cess­ful read­ing. Fig­ure [ 4 ] is an exam­ple of sen­si­tiv­i­ty in the search for the beau­ty in the nat­ur­al land­scape. With min­i­mum inter­ven­tions between the stone mega­liths, Ishiga­mi designed eight vil­las in Dali: the design pro­pos­al was based on a pre­vi­ous painstak­ing exam­i­na­tion of the prop­er­ties of each stone as a liv­ing being. Only small adjust­ments of the stones were done, where­as the land­scape per­me­ates the vil­las as phi­los­o­phy of life close to nature. For this project, he uses poem-draw­ings to express the atmos­pheres he desires to achieve with the new site-sen­si­tive solu­tion: Walk­ing the site, phys­i­cal­ly sens­ing / small places amid the vast fields of boul­ders, / man­age­able, liv­able spaces were found. / These are joined to form / a sin­gle large struc­ture” (Ishiga­mi 2018, 117). Through vers­es, the archi­tect aims to invite the read­er to look at the project by imag­in­ing his own way­far­ing through the place by encour­ag­ing an imag­i­na­tion of the first per­son expe­ri­ence instead of look­ing at the draw­ings two-dimensionally. 

Anoth­er exam­ple is Ishigami’s House with plants, a poem-draw­ing ded­i­cat­ed to that design pro­pos­al. Here, the author invites the read­er to imag­ine a nev­er-fin­ished world in which the desire—the imag­i­na­tion of the transformation—brings an aware­ness of a new con­cept of archi­tec­ture: the one that is dif­fer­ent from shel­ter” that keeps us sep­a­rat­ed from the world. It soft­ens the bor­der between the inside and out­side and allows the nature, the snow, the sun, the rain to become a cru­cial co-cre­ator of its being. This is one’s way of free­ing archi­tec­ture when deal­ing with the innu­mer­able demands and chal­lenges of this world: inter­pret­ing it more freely” and approach­ing it more open­ly” (2018, 11).

The third exam­ple of a trans­la­tion of spa­tial val­ues into design solu­tions is the Botan­i­cal Farm Gar­den. A land­scape archi­tec­ture project, it exhibits Ishigami’s obses­sive analy­sis of each tree as an indi­vid­ual, as an old friend” who changed its place of liv­ing in a new mesh­work of move­ments and rela­tions. The task was to relo­cate a for­est (a hotel-to-be-built loca­tion) in the adja­cent mead­ow, in order to pre­vent cut­ting of the trees. Ishiga­mi imple­ments the his­to­ry of the place by poet­ic re-think­ing of its mytho­log­i­cal past through the present: 1. long ago, it was a pad­dy field and a mossy for­est; 2. today, there is a stream and a sluice gate recov­ered in the new sce­nario. Hence, a super­im­po­si­tion of all the lay­ers from past envi­ron­ments in the site’s his­to­ry” occurs (2018, exhi­bi­tion guide). A poe­t­i­za­tion of exist­ing qual­i­ties is devel­oped through the sen­si­tive re-think­ing through design.

a – Map of wounded places (tracing paper layer 1)
b –	Desired atmospheres (layer 2)
a – Map of wounded places (tracing paper layer 1)
b –	Desired atmospheres (layer 2)
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a – Map of wounded places (tracing paper layer 1)

b – Desired atmospheres (layer 2)

The last exam­ple of way­far­ing through poem-draw­ing as a trans­la­tion of site-spe­cif­ic spa­tial val­ues in an urban design project is exhib­it­ed in [ 5 ]. After cycles of tri­a­logues in re-read­ing Ohrid through three imag­i­nary char­ac­ters, site-spe­cif­ic spa­tial val­ues are rec­og­nized, and then trans­lat­ed in each of the three design solu­tions; one being the re-think­ing of a mahal­la street (a pedes­tri­an street in a dense­ly orga­nized tra­di­tion­al urban tis­sue) as a semi-pub­lic spa­tial enti­ty that exhibits site-spe­cif­ic ways of human life. 

Fig­ure [ 5a ] is a map of one of the cho­sen mahal­la streets. Frag­ments in black mark struc­tures in decay”, and the pink sur­faces are green frag­ments fram­ing the pedes­tri­an prom­e­nade” (Bog­dano­va, Spa­sevs­ka and Niko­va 2018, 140). Wound­ed places are traced and re-cre­at­ed into micro pedes­tri­an squares: neigh­bor­hood mar­kets and semi-open struc­tures as knots of social­iza­tion between the neigh­bors” (140). Fig­ure [ 5b ] rep­re­sents a pos­si­ble way of heal­ing spa­tial wounds through desired atmos­pheres in per­spec­tive, sec­tion and axonom­e­try: hang­ing cra­dles ori­ent­ed towards the city scape and the lake, per­go­las hold­ing creep­ers, vines and ros­es cre­at­ing a fil­i­gree shad­ow above the bench­es, bird cot­tages in the tree­tops, urban yards and craft-mar­kets con­nect­ing the prom­e­nade with the low­er city visu­al­ly” (140). The vers­es exhib­it feel­ings we aim to bring with the new­ly pro­posed sce­nario: Float­ing tem­po­rary crea­tures above ground tracks…an invis­i­ble cor­po­re­al­i­ty … he took me through a fil­i­gree embroi­dered by porous tree­tops” (ibid.).

Place-Making: Alongly Integrated’ Knowledge of the Inhabitant

As inhab­i­tants of the world, crea­tures of all kinds, human and non-human, are way­far­ers, and … way­far­ing is a move­ment of self-renew­al or becom­ing rather than the trans­port of already con­sti­tut­ed beings from one loca­tion to anoth­er. Mak­ing their ways through the tan­gle of the world, way­far­ers grow into its fab­ric and con­tribute through their move­ments to its ever-evolv­ing weave. Ingold 2016 | 2007, 119

It is nec­es­sary to stress that way­far­ers should be con­sid­ered suc­cess­ful inhab­i­tants” of a place (Ingold 2016 | 2007, 104). They are nei­ther nomads who fail to estab­lish a mean­ing­ful tie with a place, nor set­tlers who tend to occu­py” a place due to their con­di­tion of restrict­ed hori­zon of a life lived only there” (104). This metaphor by Ingold reminds us of the pre­vi­ous­ly empha­sized need of the bal­anced rhythm of close­ness and dis­tance from the object of atten­tion. There­fore, inhab­it­ing would be a con­di­tion in which there is a cor­re­spond­ing growth and becom­ing between the way­far­er and the places he / she is stretch­ing towards and through. This means that way­far­ing is nei­ther place­less nor place-bound, but place-mak­ing” (104). Pro­ceed­ing along the dis­cern­ment of the world through simul­ta­ne­ous self-dis­cov­ery, the way­far­er knows as he goes”, so the inhab­i­tant knowl­edge is along­ly inte­grat­ed” (ibid. 91).

Relat­ed to the design­ers work­ing with poem-draw­ings as way­far­ing meth­ods”, their inhab­i­tant con­di­tion allows coher­ence between what one feels, knows, remem­bers, recalls, reads, believes, desires and designs in a cer­tain moment of the cre­ation­al time­line. This way of dai­ly recon­struc­tion of knowl­edge through the inte­gra­tion of expe­ri­ence and imag­i­na­tion requires a sen­si­tiv­i­ty in con­struct­ing a the­o­ry through design, i. e., a vision of true archi­tec­ture that is built upon a high­ly indi­vid­ual (even anar­chis­tic) re-eval­u­a­tion of par­a­digms, man­i­festos, or any oth­er mode of col­lec­tive think­ing that harms the free­dom of deep thought. More­over, it asks for a meta-under­stand­ing of spa­tial qual­i­ties: an adapt­able and trans­formable approach accord­ing to the spa­tio-tem­po­ral con­text of the design task. And final­ly, it demands look­ing at, mov­ing through and re-cre­at­ing of the world as a project, not as a sub­ject or object” (Jonas, 2018). 

Fragments of Le Corbusier’s “Poem of the Right Angle” (2012/1953) © FLC-ADAGP
Fragments of Le Corbusier’s “Poem of the Right Angle” (2012/1953) © FLC-ADAGP
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Fragments of Le Corbusier’s “Poem of the Right Angle” (2012/1953) © FLC-ADAGP

Fig­ure [ 6 ] shows frag­ments of Le Corbusier’s vision of truth, com­posed by poems and draw­ings stand­ing close to each oth­er. Although they do not over­lap, their sys­tem­at­ic dis­tri­b­u­tion in a t‑shaped table of con­tent tries to make an order, a per­son­al guide­line of archi­tec­tur­al behav­ior which is not igno­rant towards the dif­fer­ent sit­u­a­tions in the time-space real­i­ty. The hermeneu­tic void of his poem-draw­ings invites the read­er to par­tic­i­pate in the co-cre­ation of the guide­lines; but unlike his Jour­ney to the East”, here we are faced with a mature crit­i­cal reflec­tion of his own archi­tec­tur­al beliefs and archi­tec­tur­al prac­tice. We can find the sim­i­lar along­ly inte­grat­ed the­o­ry” in John Hejduk’s Vladi­vos­tok” (1989). The book begins with an ekphra­sis for Michelangelo’s sculp­tures; the main sto­ry devel­ops as a text-draw­ing the­ater of mythol­o­gy where the main char­ac­ters are urban ele­ments ani­mat­ed as human beings; the book ends with a sequence of poem-draw­ings titled Eros”, radi­at­ing a spir­i­tu­al­ly preg­nant aura. In both cas­es, when sens­ing their prophet­ic char­ac­ter, we can say that Vladi­vos­tok and Poem of the Right Angle have for their authors the sig­nif­i­cance the Broth­er Kara­ma­zov (1880) has for Dos­toyevsky: a tes­ta­ment for his clear­est vision of truth as a holis­ti­cal­ly reflec­tive thought on all his pre­vi­ous artworks.

Doubts And Limitations – How to Make A Poem-Drawing Correspond with the Listener?

How does one read a poem-draw­ing aloud? What kind of per­for­mance is need­ed to express loud­ly the tie between the writ­ten and the draw­ing frag­ments? Can a poem be felt when read aloud with­out look­ing at the sketch­es as an insep­a­ra­ble part of it? We expe­ri­enced these doubts dur­ing a pre­sen­ta­tion and exhi­bi­tion, when asked to read aloud one poem-drawing. 

Two dif­fi­cul­ties” were present: 1. it is impos­si­ble to under­stand a poem-draw­ing nei­ther by lis­ten­ing nor by read­ing if it is decon­tex­tu­al­ized from the design process in which it has been cre­at­ed; 2. in poem-draw­ings where the lines between vers­es and draw­ings inter­twine more organ­i­cal­ly, a del­i­cate slow­ness in study­ing the silent piece of paper is required, where­as the ver­bal per­for­mance was almost impos­si­ble. This can be seen as a lim­i­ta­tion of archi­tec­tur­al way­far­ing, but it can also be seen as a chal­lenge to dis­cern modes of expres­sion dif­fer­ent than the ver­bal in which a poem-draw­ing can be shared (dance, per­for­mance, pantomime…). 

Poem-draw­ing as a proces­su­al mode in design can encour­age cor­re­spon­dence in co-cre­ation between designer(s)’s inner­ness and the out­side envi­ron­ment in dif­fer­ent moments of the design process. But poem-draw­ing, as a rep­re­sen­ta­tion­al mode would demand an even more com­plex cor­re­spon­dence: the one between the author and the lis­ten­ing audi­ence: True knowl­edge can be expe­ri­enced only through speech; it is nev­er gained for­ev­er and must always be reac­ti­vat­ed in the present” (Perez-Gomez, 2006, 66). In order to be under­stood and felt, a poem should be more and less than a poem at the same time: it needs to grow into a cor­re­spon­dent to draw­ing, a speak­ing light that reveals what is drawn from a dis­tance. It needs to grow from an authen­tic lan­guage of expres­sion and written/drawn com­mu­ni­ca­tion into a poet­i­cal­ly spo­ken lan­guage, a liv­ing word that makes the silent grain of wis­dom trans­fer­able to oth­er way­far­ers. Oth­er­wise, the way­far­ing through the self in the design process will remain unheard, hid­den in the silent hiero­glyph­ic sym­bols. Way­far­ing, a lone­ly process of self-alter­ing through Pathfind­ing, becomes mean­ing­less if it does not cor­re­spond to and inter­weave with the Paths of liv­ing wayfarers.

Addi­tion­al­ly, the organ­ic birth of poem-draw­ing involves emo­tions, mem­o­ries, dreams, beliefs, unmea­sur­able” spa­tial qual­i­ties and gen­er­ates a chaot­ic mat­ter with­out eas­i­ly vis­i­ble ties. To be under­stood in the con­text of a design process, a rig­or­ous­ly sys­tem­at­ic way to exhib­it their mean­ing, impor­tance and place­ment in the process is nec­es­sary. Oth­er­wise, the way­far­ing through poem-draw­ing could not be explained well enough to be under­stood as mean­ing­ful mode of doing archi­tec­ture. This also means, that the recita­tion of a proces­su­al poem-draw­ing could hard­ly make a clear sense with­out a simul­ta­ne­ous the­o­ret­i­cal reflec­tion on the designed work.

  1. 1

    Sea­mon uses the term per­son-world inti­ma­cy” as a metaphor for the phe­nom­e­no­log­i­cal research, accord­ing to which the per­son and the envi­ron­ment con­sti­tute an indi­vis­i­ble whole. This implies that the research relies heav­i­ly on the person’s atti­tude, recep­tiv­i­ty and respon­sive­ness.

  2. 2

    Ingold uses Polanyi’s pyra­mid to visu­al­ly demon­strate an under­stand­ing of tac­it knowl­edge as the under­wa­ter part of a sink­ing pyra­mid, an immov­able sta­t­ic deposit placed under the explic­it knowl­edge (placed above water). He sug­gests the arch­i­pel­ago metaphor as a more dynam­ic visu­al alternative.

  3. 3

    The process of mak­ing, trans­for­ma­tion, the activ­i­ty in which a per­son brings some­thing into being that did not exist before” (Polk­ing­horne, 2004, 115).

  4. 4

    A rep­re­sen­ta­tion of a phe­nom­e­non into an under­stand­able infor­ma­tion, a fact, extract­ed from the wider com­plex­i­ty of its exis­tence. Jung describes how extreme con­creti­cism sets too high a val­ue on the impor­tance of facts at the expense of the psy­chic inde­pen­dence of the indi­vid­ual”: it makes one grow togeth­er” with the object of per­cep­tion as result of non-artic­u­lat­ed sen­sa­tion (1963, 360–361). An extreme abstrac­tion is the very oppo­site. In spa­tial obser­va­tion, a rhyth­mi­cal bal­ance of abstrac­tion and con­cretiza­tion would mean a rhythm of defa­mil­iar­iza­tion from and immer­sion in the envi­ron­men­tal prob­lem, a sequence of repet­i­tive small deaths” of one’s pre­vi­ous con­cep­tions ways of learn­ing to see, think and cre­ate (Peter­son, 2018, 223). In this con­text, datum is an inevitable human reduc­tion of real­i­ty; its inten­si­ty depends on how cul­ti­vat­ed is one’s resis­tance towards extreme abstract or extreme con­cretis­tic atti­tude in read­ing and trans­lat­ing places.

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    A degree of abstrac­tion that is not to extreme and harm­ful in the deval­u­a­tion of the object, that is not igno­rant towards its core val­ues, but builds upon their pres­ence in reality.

This essay is elab­o­rat­ed as reflec­tion on the author’s PhD in progress enti­tled: Emo­tive Immer­sion Through Poem- Draw­ing in Spa­tial Design” at the Uni­ver­si­ty of Ljubl­jana Fac­ul­ty of Archi­tec­ture, Ljubl­jana, Slovenia.

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